That is just about there Tim -- just needs a bit of a pep-up -- remember it's a marketing tool i.e an advertisement for the project.... otherwise all is v. good.
BTW could you note down here who else is in your group please.
Pitch line:
What is the relationship between a ball and a big dumb caveman? Whatever, you know it’s gonna be funny! Caveman is a rapid-fire animation that uses a unique combination of 2D and 3D imagery.
Synopsis:
What is that big dumb caveman doing with that ball? Why is he rolling it? Where is he going with it? ‘Caveman’ is a short rapid-fire animation that uses a unique combination of 2D and 3D imagery to explore what might be the first visual gag in history.
“Imouto” (Little sister) is a speedy stylish 3D action RPG, the player is required to beat the monsters up by using various weapons and magic to find out the specific medicine to recover the poisoned little sister.
Synopsis
Imouto is a fantasy based speedy Action RPG. In the game the player is able to choose one of three playable characters to start your journey in the world of magic power and monsters. Each character is in a different class (fighter, ranger and mage) and having different abilities. Living monsters in the world are all active and aggressive. The game contains dynamic and impressive particle effects, created in Torque game engine. Also the game is split into Single play mode (story based) and multi play mode (tactics and teamplay based) so the player can enjoy the two completely different gameplay modes in one game.
That's great Yuta -- and just needs a little tiny b it more work. Also could you put down the names of your other team members so they get their marks too.
What specifically you need to look at is little problems of expression: I've made some corrections -- but please feel very free to look at the synopsis and make different ones....
"Imouto is a fantasy-based speedy action RPG. Choose between three playable characters to start your journey in the world of magic, power and monsters. Each character is in a different class (fighter, ranger and mage) and has different abilities. The world is full of active and aggressive monsters. The game contains dynamic and impressive particle effects created in Torque game engine. The game is split into single-play mode (story based) and multi-play mode (tactics and teamplay based) so the player can enjoy the two completely different gameplay experiences in one game."
Final Front is a fun and challenging flash action adventure game platformer combining old school arcade concepts with modern game complexity.
Synopsis:
The player takes control of kreuger the main character of the game as they guide through 5 levels of intense combat and puzzle solving as well as being picking up an arsenal of weapons and items along the way. They will encounter several mini bosses as well as facing off with the main boss in a final climatic battle. This game is ideal for passing the time as well as something to do in those boring rainy afternoons
Olympus is an adventure through colour. It is a mixture between 'Troy' and the colour of 'Disneys - The lion king'
Synopsis:
Olympus is a 2d platformer unlike any other platform game before it. The colour palletes used in each level, encourage the player to play further into the game
to see even more of the beautiful worlds. The story line is filled with twists and turns that keep the player on the edge of their seats at all times! Will you become
the God of all Greece? Or will you perish and never be remembered for anything but failure.
Frost, is a point and click story game that engages the gamers feelings and thoughts to progress through the storyline with each click of the mouse button. With numerous locations around rural and regional Victoria to investigate, Frost is one of the first games of its kind to venture out into the real life locations of Australia.
Frost, the retired ACI Agent, is thrusted into the mystery of the Casino bombing that injures his brother horrifically. Emotionally driven, Frost must find out why and who was that cause for this terror attack. He further discovers a formula that will most certainly increase the likelihood of terrorism becoming a sport. When known of his discovery becomes somewhat public, Frosts adventure becomes more of an investigation, into a survival on the run, revenge thriller.
Deadly Ball Soccer game is a PC game for First person view of sports shooting game.
The main objective for playing this game is to shoot the ball into the opposition’s goal. The way which programmer designed the level is based on the Unreal engine.
The player cannot use any weapons in the game but they can jump into 3 platforms to create extra challenge. The main objective for this sport game is to obtain the highest number of scores in order to win the game. This game is suitable for people between 15 years or above, and the game play will last around 2 – 4 hours.